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Recorded: November 18, 2012
Canvas Size: 1060×612
Submitted: November 18, 2012
Submitted with: deviantART muro

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StarFire's stupid move gone wrongby *SageDemon756

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Critique by ~ILUVSHADUWSUMOCH Nov 18, 2012, 8:52:40 PM

I definitely see what you're trying to do. But in order to capture the attention of people may I suggest doing more realistic colors.

And instead of doing anthro try doing a bit more realistic?The wings are magnificent in all truth, the paws could use some work along with the neck and face.The ears aren't too bad, and the hair..Well,that's everyone's own opinion,I personally don't like hair but to each their own.The 'cliff' shall we call it net to it could use some work too. Over all not too bad with muro.

Hope this helps, enjoy being a dA artist!

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